Necessity
Woke at five on the dot as usual. Pulled on a pair of shorts and a sweatshirt. I sat in a worn lawn chair on the balcony and smoked a cigarette. The air was wet and warm. The predawn was nearly silent except for the sound of a few trucks already making deliveries. The lights were still off in the surrounding tall buildings. Dark pools of water standing in the black streets reflected the orange globes of the streetlamps as if some ingenious person had lit the street from below as well as above.
People who missed the end of night walked the streets after dawn. They listened to an inner voice singing of necessity.
5 Comments:
I like this. Particularly the first paragraph. The second paragraph...
Is this a timely autobiographic moment, or fiction?
-epm
(Please forgive the unsolicited writing criticism.)
epm,
It is how my morning started today.
I like the edit to the second paragraph.
What do you think of changing "singing" to "calling?" It has a slightly more deterministic coloring that plays well with "necessity." No?
I hope these comments of mine don't offend. You know what they say about that who can't do...
epm,
Your comments never offend and are always most welcome. And don't be so modest!
Singing/calling? Always so many darned choices. I'll think on it.
In the amusing movie "Throw Mamma From the Train," Billy Crystal plays a writer with a severe case of writers block. The opening scene is painfully funny to anyone whose ever anguished over finding just the right word, as we watch him struggle to complete the opening sentence of his new novel.
"The night was..."
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